Question by nicole: What do you think about my résumé objective?
·To obtain a customer service position to an organization with enthusiasm, dedication, responsibility, and good work ethic combined with a desire to utilize my skills.
How can I make it better?
Please and a bunch of thanks!:D
Best answer:
Answer by Ashlee
I like it! Not to long and straight to the point.
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You need to change the sentence to “to obtain a customer service position in your company, where I can utilize my skills as well as become an asset to your company” This sounds less confusing, more to the point, and more professional!